Monday, April 7, 2014

#23 Synthesis Essay-The Battle Waged Between Inner and Outer Self

Zoe Storch
AP Multicultural Literature
Wilson
6 April, 2014

               In nearly every great work of literature, there is a common struggle that often weaves itself through the storyline and into the hero’s journey.  This famous thread is not just a battle waged by the protagonist but a universal truth that parallels our own human nature. It deals with the power struggle that arises between wisdom and knowledge, culture and experience.  When faced with completing a journey towards self-actualization, all great literary characters find that it’s their past that shapes their future. The corruption of society and its skewed values often sidetrack characters and cause them to feel as though they are prisoners in their own bodies, separated from their true souls. Hamlet or Gogol, Prince of Denmark or angst-y young adult, ancient wisdom and “inner” self always wins out in the fight for self-knowledge. Traits that significantly shape human identity, such as culture or age, are out of the protagonist’s control, but when tapped into, control their growth. 
Storch 1
            Described by Hamlet as a “mortal coil”, there is a separation that exists in literature between a hero’s outer body and inner soul.  Born with set cultural beliefs and values, characters begin realizing that the relationships they enter into shape them in a way far different from how their soul already exists. Janie, of Their Eyes were Watching God, is in her second marriage when she realizes that, “she had an inside and an outside now and suddenly she knew how not to mix them.” (Hurston 72) As a girl, Janie is raised by her grandmother, in a life that deeply roots her in a set of values.  Molded by different men throughout her journey, (like the symbol of a pear tree and its pollination by bees), Janie has to decide which bees she will accept in shaping her and which she will deny, in order to preserve her beliefs. Similarly, Lisa Parker poem, Snapping Beans, deals with the separate spheres of home and school and their relation to the spheres of “outer” and “inner” self.  The young girl’s repetition of “I wanted to tell her…” and her feelings of “…how I was tearing, splitting myself apart…” make clear the inner battle between the two settings and their contrasting values (Parker 20). Just like Janie, Snapping Bean’s protagonist is in a similar stage of her journey towards self-actualization, where she has made the realization that two worlds cannot always exist as one; there is give and take needed to maintain cultural identity, because in the end, “inner” values are more vital to success.  Mahmoud Darwish’s Identity Card explores a more obvious cultural situation.  In a world where society isn’t just shaping him but destroying his culture, the main character differs from Janie, because he already knows that inner values are of higher importance than bending to fit societal views.  “I have a name without a title,” he states, proudly (Darwish 19). In this case, he is aware that family names come over superficial titles; a value that has already furthered him in the race to the top of Maslow’s model.
Storch 2
            The separation that occurs between a character’s cultural values and outer self stems from their past.  In every case of great literature, no matter what culture, the protagonist’s past lays a blueprint for their future. Although they go through a journey, filled with experiences and obstacles that mold them, their pasts and cultural identities have already determined a set outcome.  Take the relationship between Janie and her grandmother.  The repeated theme of the novel deals with constraint, submission.  We see it mostly in Janie’s trials and tribulations, but the truth is, her grandmother’s life had pre-carved Janie’s.  Explaining to her granddaughter her own youth she recalls, “ah was born back due in slavery so it wasn’t for me to fulfill my dreams of what a woman oughta be and do.” (Hurston 16). If it hadn’t been for her grandmother’s own desires and dreams, Janie would have never been forced into early marriage with a man she didn’t love. Living her life through her granddaughter, (although in good intention), Janie’s grandmother unknowingly forces her past to control the future of another individual.  Hamlet perhaps most eloquently states this fact of literature in his declaration, “As, in their birth-wherein they are not guilty, since nature cannot choose his origin.” (Act I, scene iv, 24). If the prince of Denmark could have relayed this fact to Janie, better yet, if he would have listened to himself, maybe the journeys of these characters would have taken a different turn.  The Namesake’s Gogol also lives this universal truth of literature. For at the very moment he’s born his mother whispers, “Hello Gogol” and she, “approves, aware that the name stands not only for her son’s life but her husband’s.” (Lahiri 28). If these characters are able to realize what is shaping them and how, their quest for self-knowledge shortens greatly. It’s true for nearly every hero and hero’s journey.  The past isn’t just where an individual comes from; it’s where they are bound to be going.
Storch 3
            In most realistic situations, age is thought to stand for a weakening of power, a loss of the strife that comes with youth.  In literary situations however, age is symbolic of the “yoda affect”, an acquirement of ancient wisdom and a closer position to achieving self-actualization.  Contrasting the beginning and end of Janie’s journey, as well as the symbol of the road, we see the clear difference that age makes in understanding the factors that shape us. Initially, Janie remembers that, “it was time for sitting on porches beside the road” (Hurston 1). After having grown and matured, she recalls, “combing road dust out of her hair.” (Hurston 192). Instead of sitting beside life, she begins to live it.  And, in living it, finds who she is with the help of her past.  Snapping Beans protagonist describes how her grandmother “reached the leather of her hand over the bowl and cupped my quivering chin.” (Parker 26).  In this old versus youthful situation, Parker clearly demonstrates the contrast between ancient wisdom and naïve youth.  She suggests that with age comes a different form of strength, one that arises from an understanding of who you are.  Similarly, Darwish’s Identity Card demonstrates that wise old age may not only be gained as an individual, but rather, as a culture.  The speaker of the poem asserts that his roots were, “entrenched before the birth of time.” (Darwish 22).  In an attempt to protect his homeland from societal ruin, he utilizes the belief that ancient values form a deeper cultural significance, on that cannot so easily face destruction by outside forces. Throughout literature, this similar theme arises, yet is played out in different scenarios.  The hero that finds the strength to complete his journey however, is often the one that understands the brevity of youth and the capacity of age.
Storch 4
            This capacity also deals with the battle waged between wisdom and knowledge. It seems a great misconception that it most cases, knowledge (that of books and tests), is greater than that of ancient wisdom. For nearly all of literature’s great hero’s the opposite proves to be true. Identity Card’s speaker asserts how his culture, “teaches […] the pride of the sun before teaching how to read.” (Darwish 30). Because cultural identity is the most vital trait to a character’s growth, he recognizes that power of listening to and applying cultural values and beliefs over societal standards.  For Gogol Ganguli’s father, this realization has not yet been made when he is on the train on his way to his grandfather’s to collect a suitcase full of books. “Ashoke was saddened, as he placed the empty suitcase under his seat […] regretful of the circumstances that would cause it, upon his return, to be full.” (Lahiri 13).  He is unaware that the suitcase will not be filled with books, but with the wisdom of his grandfather.  Unlike the voice of Identity Card, Ashoke hasn’t yet reached the understanding that wisdom is a gift, something that needs to be grasped onto and saved.  He is more focused on the material knowledge, a value that wrongly leads him to worship a different form of intelligence, which in his future, is forced to change.
Storch 5
            Continuing on in their odyssey for self-knowledge, characters are at some point faced with the realization and fear of their pasts.  Most often, the protagonist ignores his or her cultural identity in the hopes that they will grow and excel only from outside experiences. Yet it is this cultural identity that is the most vital to their achievement. Only once acknowledging and accepting their pasts can they have the chance at a future. In his dramatic “to be or not to be” soliloquy, Hamlet debates death as a viable option for ultimate freedom.  Just like the protagonist is often afraid of confronting their cultural past, Hamlet is fearful of accepting where we all have come from and where we are all headed.  He wonders aloud, “the undiscover’s country from whose bourn no traveler returns puzzles the will…” (Act III, scene I, 78).  It’s not exactly cultural identity, but it corresponds to the dilemma fellow literary characters face. Not until after the soliloquy is Hamlet able to move forward with his life.  Acceptance of the past and the ability to tap into it furthers heroes in their quests. A literary character with a very different background, Gogol Ganguli of The Namesake, comes to an identical realization of that of Hamlet’s. However, his epiphany moment is later in life, late in his journey for self-actualization, and therefore, doesn’t do him as much good as the prince of Denmark.  After his father’s death he understands that, “all those trips to Calcutta he’d once resented- how could they have been enough? They were not enough.” (Lahiri 281).  For Gogol, life had been spent distancing himself from what was most important to his growth.  When he finally sees the power behind his past, it is difficult for him to bridge the gap between his two lives.  Like Gogol’s separate lives, the speaker of Snapping Beans is dealt two separate spheres- home and school.  She, at first, can divide her outer and inner selves to play a part according to her setting.  As she begins to mature though, acting out a role at school proves more detrimental than rewarding. She recalls how her, “stomach burned acidic holes at the thought of speaking in class, speaking in an accent.” (Parker 35).  Compared to Hamlet and Gogol, she is the farthest from the resolution of her journey, and also the most ashamed of her past.  Without recognition of this cultural identity, the one that links her to her grandmother, she is unable to move forward with her future.
Storch 6
            Even after characters understand the value of cultural identity, ancient wisdom, and their pasts, there is still the threat from society to corrupt the individual.  When speaking about the individual and the chance for corruption Hamlet asserts, “Their virtues else- be they pure as grace[…] shall in the general censure take corruption.” (Act I, scene iv, 34). (It seems as if Hamlet knows the answers to everything and just doesn’t hear himself when he speaks.)  Although experience and relationships will shape characters such as Hamlet, there is societal corruption and temptation that no matter what, negatively influences virtues in the end.  Without the sin that society causes however, literature’s protagonists wouldn’t seem as human.  These flaws allow characters a chance to redeem themselves and to grow from failure by getting even closer with their pasts.  In Snapping Beans the young girl thinks about telling her grandmother “that [her] friends wore nose rings and wrote poetry about sex, about alcoholism, about Buddha.” (Parker 32).  These societal influences aren’t necessarily all negatives, but in the eyes of her grandmother, seem outrageous when compared to the values of her culture.  In this way, they are distancing the girl from where she needs to be to achieve self-actualization.  Gogol Ganguli feels a similar pressure from society when he goes to court in order to legally change his name. “What is the reason you wish to change your name, Mr. Ganguli? […] He wonders whether to tell the judge the whole convoluted story […] about what had happened on the first day of kindergarten.” (Lahiri 101). In this case, a major legal and life decision of Gogol’s is rooted in the desire to please society.  In pleasing society, he takes one step back on his journey to self-knowledge and distances himself from the past that he shares not only with his parents, but with a majority of the world and its heroes.  Like Identity Card’s speaker and his assertion that society has, “stolen the orchards of [his] ancestors and the land cultivated along with [his] children,” Gogol and all other literary protagonists often feel as if society is tearing up the “roots” of their culture. If, even after negative relationships and societal pressures, characters are able to connect with their “inner selves” and cultural identities, then it is possible that they will be able to work their way to the top of Maslow’s hierarchy in achievement of self-actualization.
            No matter where in literature you look, all great heroes and protagonists are faced with a very similar dilemma concerning their pasts and how to use them.  Faced with the temptations and sin of societal values, they often forget their own cultural identity and are pushed farther and farther away from ever discovering their full potential.  Traits that significantly shape human identity are out of human control, such as age or culture, but are the most vital elements in controlling the future.  Whether it’s Hamlet’s quest for revenge, Gogol Ganguli’s search for identity, or Janie’s journey towards independence and self-actualization, all literary heroes are linked by a universal truth of human nature; the fact that accepting and employing their pasts as a powerful tool is the key to unlocking their future.
           
           
           
Storch 7
           
Works Cited
Darwish, Mahmoud. Identity Card. N.d. Poem.
Hurston, Zora Neale. Their Eyes Were Watching God: A Novel. New York: Perennial Library, 1990. Print.
Lahiri, Jhumpa. The Namesake. Boston: Houghton Mifflin, 2003. Print.
Parker, Lisa. Snapping Beans. N.d. Poem.
Shakespeare, William, and Harold Jenkins. Hamlet. London: Methuen, 1982. Print.


#22 Synthesis Matrix

Text Box: Thesis Statement/MPs:
-Wisdom is greater than knowledge when it comes to completing the quest for self-actualization – 
-Traits that significantly shape human identity, such as culture or age, are out of the protagonist’s control, but when tapped into, control their growth. 
-idea of outer vs. inner self (it’s these “inner self” factors that determine our self-actualization)

Concept Related to Theme
TEWWG
Snapping Beans
Identity Card
Hamlet
The Namesake
Separation between mind and soul, how growing and changing may not affect inner beliefs (body is a prison that can be corrupted)
“she had an inside and an outside now and suddenly she knew how not to mix them.” (Hurston 72)
-Janie struggles to make a happy combination of her cultural identity and relationship values
Repetition of “I wanted to tell her…” “…how I was tearing, splitting myself apart…” (Parker 20)
-separate spheres of home and school causes an inner battle over balance between the two settings and their different lifestyles
“I have a name without a title.” (Darwish 19)
-importance of family name and background over a “title” (superficial)
“When we have shuffled off this mortal coil…” (Act III, scene I, 66)
-Hamlet views the body more as a prison-vulnerable to corruption of society.
-belief that death may be the only escape from the struggle between outer and inner.

Age=thought to be symbolic of loss of power, but really gaining of wisdom
“It was time for sitting on porches beside the road.” (1)
-Contrast of start and end of her journey/age
“Combing road dust out of her hair.” (192)
-the conclusion of her long journey along the “road of life” made her wiser than at the start
“She reached the leather of her hand over the bowl and cupped my quivering chin.” (26)
-Contrast of the power of ancient wisdom and the uncertainty of youth.
“…my roots were entrenched before the birth of time.” (22)
-this very deep-rooted culture leads to more stable beliefs-not so easily knocked down by societal values.
Bildungsroman-coming of age tale
“You are the most immediate to our throne; and with no less nobility of love than that which dearest father bears his son, do I impart toward you.”
(Act I,scene ii, 109)

Wisdom over knowledge

“It’s funny how things blow loose like that.” (46)
“…the evening star was a planet…” (31)
-Although she wants to tell her grandmother the truths about life (book truth), her grandmother already knows more about life than school could ever teach the girl. (there’s a different kind of power that comes with wisdom than with knowledge.)
“…teaches me the pride of the sun before teaching me how to read.”(30)
-emphasizes the power of a more ancient kind of knowledge. Whatever is trying to destroy their family’s lifestyle doesn’t and will never understand this.

“Ashoke was saddened, as he place the empty suitcase under his seat […] regretful of the circumstances that would cause it, upon his return, to be full.” (13)
-Not aware that it will not be full with books, but with the wisdom of his grandfather (will shape the remainder of his life and onto Gogol’s.)
Characters have the need to confront the fear of their past in order to move up in achieving self-actualization

“…how my stomach burned acidic holes at the thought of speaking in class, speaking in an accent…” (35)
-separate spheres of school and home
-fear of their combination and what will result (society’s ridicule)-makes it hard for her to grow.

“The undiscover’d country from whose bourn no traveler returns, puzzles the will...” (Act III, scene 1, 78)
-not culture, but to where we all come from before we live and where we go when we die.
-knowing and accepting this fear allows him to move on.
“All those trips to Calcutta he’s once resented-how could they have been enough? They were not enough.” (281)
-towards end of his journey, one of the last steps in finally achieving self-knowledge (resentment)
Societal values (over cultural) corrupt the individual

“…that my friends wore nose rings and wrote poetry about sex, about alcoholism, about Buddha.” (32)
-she is proud of the new things she’s learned but is unaware that they will do more harm than good in her journey.
“You have stolen the orchards of my ancestors and the land which I cultivated along with my children.” (39)
-society is tearing up the “roots” of his family and culture.
“Their virtues else-be they as pure as grace […] shall in the general censure take corruption from that particular fault…” (Act I, scene iv, 34)
-Although experience and relationship may shape people’s virtues, there is corruption that no matter what, will negatively affect them in the end. (inevitable).
“What is the reason you wish to change your name, Mr. Ganguli? […] He wonders whether to tell the judge the whole convoluted story […] about what had happened on the first day of kindergarten.” (101)
-A major legal and life decision of Gogol’s comes from the view that society holds about his name, really his past and his parents’ pasts.
Characters’ pasts lay a blueprint for their future (although they go through a journey, their pasts and cultures already determine the outcome/their potential).
“Ah was born back due in slavery so it wasn’t for me to fulfill my dreams of what a woman oughta be and to do.” (16)
-Her grandmother’s past not only determined the life she lived, but prompted her to live her life through Janie.


“As, in their birth-wherein they are not guilty, since nature cannot choose his origin-“ (Act I, scene iv, 24)
-concedes that an individuals’ origin does not make him guilty of his character, but does determine it.
“’Hello Gogol. […] Ashima approves, aware that the name stands not only for her son’s life, but her husband’s.” (28)
-train incident- similar to Janie’s grandmother- shaped Ashoke’s life and indirectly, Gogol’s namesake.

Saturday, March 29, 2014

#20 "Spoken Dish" Memoir: Lemon Soup for the Soul

            “Some people think the most precious gift you could inherit is healthful, delicious food.” (Smith, Heirloom Foods).  The summer of my seventh grade year, I took a trip to my grandmother’s family house on the Greek island of Ikaria and learned just that. It was the hottest summer they’d seen in fifteen years. Islanders couldn’t stop sweating; both in the air conditioning and in the sea.  So, obviously my grandmother decided to make her famous, piping hot lemon soup.

A steady, hundred degree heat radiated off my grandmother’s tile and into my sweaty palms.  I caught a glimpse of the crystal ocean outside. Crashing waves mixed with the hum of the kitchen sink.  The cracking of an egg. Peeling the ponytail from my dripping neck I readjusted to feel the fan’s cool air.
             “Koukla mou!”  A slight moan. I was finally comfortable. “The avgolemono is hot and ready!” 
            “But it’s ninety-seven degr…”  A wrinkled hand grabbed me from the waist and hoisted me to standing. 

 
            She didn’t even feel the Greek, afternoon heat.  Her eyes were fixed on the stove in the next room and her manicured fingers were wrapped around my wrist like a serpent.  I heard her begin her lecture on not letting any ingredient go to waste. I had heard it so many times I wasn’t even annoyed.  Growing up during the Depression, she had learned to live in a way far different from my American upbringing.  Unlike my littered dinner plates, hers were spotless.  Whereas I had made a personal decision to loathe green beans, she loved every food equally.
            “I want you to give these chicken scraps to the birds by the fence.”  She handed me the meat, ignoring the look of horror on my face.
            “But…that’s cannibalism.”
            “Birds deserve a nice dinner too.”  She gently pushed me out the door and closed it.
            The next part of the story is too painful for me to reiterate but I can tell you that it involved a parade of unknowing chickens eating their siblings. The craziest part is that when it was over, I felt a deeper love for my grandmother and her beliefs about food.  Even today, she never leaves the table without giving a few noodles to my dog.  Her affection towards humans is equal to that towards every other living thing. In his series on Culture, Food, and Identity, Mervyn Claxton says that “eating together is an important social act […] a recognition of fellowship and mutual social obligation”.  For my grandmother, this social act is extended towards all.  A stereotypical Greek “yiayia”, she never turns someone away from a meal, is always cooking, and constantly finishes her sentences with, “you’re too skinny.”

 
According to Foster, eating together says, “I’m with you, I share this moment with you, I feel a bond of community with you.” (Foster 11)  As it relates to those poor chickens, this statement is all but too true.  As it relates to the entire world, I believe that this belief needs more followers. I’ve learned that food is, in some ways, the greatest equalizer.  In her novel, You are What You Eat, Claudia Cornejo asserts, “Culinary skills and choices often reflect social and personal identity.”  One of those choices being, “the ingredients considered edible”.   Sure, my grandmother’s version of edible often seems a bit extreme.  But it’s that unwavering spirit that has allowed her to open her arms to all different types of people and invite them into her life. Since that summer in Greece and in my continuous run-ins with avgolemono soup, I have come to realize that food isn’t just keeping our bodies running; it’s keeping our souls alive.
    
Works Cited

Claxton, Mervyn. "Culture, Food, and Identity." Series on Culture and Development.
            Vol. 6. N.p.: n.p., n.d. N. pag. Normangirvan.info. Web. 17 Mar. 2014.

Cornejo, Claudia A., H. "You Are What You Eat: Food as Expression of Social Identity." Home
             Cooking in the Global Village. Oxford: n.p., 2006. 176. Cromrev.com. Web. 17 Mar. 2014.

Smith, Brad. "Heirloom Foods." PBS. PBS, n.d. Web. 17 Mar. 2014.

Foster, Thomas C. How to Read Literature like a Professor: A Lively and Entertaining Guide to         
             Reading between the Lines. New York: Quill, 2003. Print.

 

Wednesday, March 5, 2014

#19 The Rainbow


Part I:  From the beginning of time, men have relentlessly contemplated the battle between strength and wisdom, brawn and brains.  For centuries, there has existed a war between the two ideas- for at first glimpse, brawn seems to bear the most obvious power, yet upon further examination, knowledge wins out.  In D.H. Lawrence’s The Rainbow, this dilemma is debated in the mind of a woman.  Through his utilization of contrasting tones and metaphoric comparison, Lawrence characterizes the woman as both a thoughtful observer and a universal truth, emphasizing the paradoxical struggle that exists between man and beast, where often times, wisdom becomes brawn and man becomes animal.

            As suddenly as it began, this prose passage shifts in tone.  After characterizing the Brangwen men and their “blood intimate” nature (16), Lawrence creates a stark contrast by recycling previous diction in giving it new meaning. Whereas “warmth and blood” initially describe a positive element of the land, the phrase “pulsing heat of creation” sheds a more negative light on this lifestyle (6,24).  Through the eyes of the woman, the men aren’t really as free and powerful as they feel, they’re caged and weak, like their animals, looking only inwards, instead of beyond, which Lawrence describes as the woman’s “deepest desire” (36).  By contrasting these two views, the woman’s inner wants and dilemmas are realized.

            This use of contrasting diction, along with the passage’s later metaphor begins to uncover a less obvious opinion held by the woman, one she may not even realize she obtains.  As she is contemplating the power the vicar holds over her husband, the comparison that exists between man and beast arises.  “What is it about the vicar,” she questions, “that raised him above the common man as man is raised above the beast?” (54) It’s Lawrence’s metaphor and rhetorical question that prompts us to follow the woman’s logic.  The woman has realized that the life of the Brangwen men limits them from looking outwards and attaining the wisdom of the world.  It is working with the beasts that makes them the beasts.

            By the conclusion of four short paragraphs, Lawrence has managed to take the woman through a complete journey, beginning with a dilemma and ending with resolution.  Contrasting diction, tone shifts, and metaphoric language allows the ambiguous character of the woman to come to life and raise the question between strength and wisdom, man and beast, and what really constitutes the role of the master.

Part II:  My initial essay score for The Rainbow prompt was a 7.  I believe that my essay clearly offers a “reasonable analysis” of the prompt and does it with “clarity and control.”  Trying to remember what I failed to grasp first trimester, I focused more on the complexity than the actual prompt, and feel like I improved in that specific area, yet for this reason, may have lacked examples of literary devices. I do however, feel like I did a better job at “referring to the text for support” instead of just slapping a bunch of quotes down on the paper.  I consciously focused on elaborately on the quotes and using them as less of a crutch.

            After learning about D.H Lawrence’s concept of “blood knowledge”, I feel like I have gained a more concrete understanding of the complexity that exists within the text.  Instead of honing in on the “man vs. beast” aspect of the passage, I wish that I had addressed the irony involving Lawrence’s own belief system.  I would have discussed the industrial revolution as well as the anger the author held towards the value placed on wisdom in Anglo-Saxon society.  Now I realize that I could have used literary devices, such as Lawrence’s repetition of “blood” and “knowledge” to support this assertion.

            Another element of my prose passage essay that I see needs improvement is the ability to “make a strong case” for my interpretation.  The fact that I could have mentioned personification and anaphora seemed to completely escape me when I was initially reading and annotating the text.  I should have discussed the personifying elements in the first paragraph such as the earth opening up to the men as a way to further my case for a tone shift and contrast in diction.  I addressed these topics, but didn’t go far enough in supporting them with concrete evidence to receive an 8 or a 9. 

            Of course, after these literary devices and complexities are pointed out to me, I see what I could have done to include them in my writing the first time.  However, my essay didn’t just lack these pieces of information, it also lacked in style.  After reading some sample essays on the same prompt, I’m trying to lock in my brain the keys for stylistic success in a prose passage essay.  Next time, I’m going to focus on completing a solid argument, outlining it, and then crafting my argument in a more convincing manner. I can tell that the most convincing essays (those who deserve 9s), don’t only address the prompt and the complexity, they use high-level diction in such a way that their argument isn’t camouflaged, it’s strengthened and sounds more intelligent.

Monday, November 11, 2013

Blog #18 Final Portfolio Reflection

      Out of all the strenuous, tear-inducing, fun assignments we've completed this trimester, I definitely have a few favorites that come to mind.  Overall, I found that I was better suited to the more creative projects because they combined structure with the freedom of choice.  One project that I'm really proud of is my Summer reading creative piece. I chose to read Wolf Hall, by Hilary Mantel, which, as I found out after receiving the novel, was about 700 pages long.  (I'm not gonna lie, just because it's more pages doesn't make it better). For my project, I decided to make a board game similar to battleship that paralleled the novel's major theme: duty vs. morality.  In the beginning, I faced some challenges with choosing the medium by which to display the theme.  Just coming up with a board game took my the longest time out of any other stage of the project. I hadn't been expecting everything to come together as well as it did, but when I finally crafted the game and wrote out my essay, all of my points supported the main theme while smoothly translating into a playable and educational board game.
        Like many others,  I really enjoyed working on the American Drama project. The assignment naturally lent itself to a more "outside-of-the-box" approach, which I liked, and which worked well for all my group members.  Originally, our group only had three girls and therefore we had chosen The Women as our play because it featured all female roles.  Little did we know our group would be joined by three dudes, which complicated things a bit.  The start of the project was round, but once we devised a plan and wrote a schedule, (and told the boys they were playing girls), things began to run more smoothly.  In the end, the testosterone addition actually added to the comedy of our video and better stressed the main theme we were trying to portray. Writing the transitions in the script was a lot of fun and they turned out extremely well when everything was put together.  Although it was hard to get things going, I learned that adjusting to things that are thrown at you and not fighting them, add to the originality of a project and that you can't have control of everything.
          As an individual, I can admit (painfully) that I have a hard time when I'm not in control of things.  In the beginning of the trimester, I was still getting used to the idea of getting a lot of group grades in the class, and truthfully, I wasn't too happy about it.  You can control your own effort, but it's hard to control other people's. My first group for this class (fellows of the pelo) turned out to be a great mix of talents and students, but it took me a while to learn to let go of all the control.  The first few assignments, I did a majority of the work, which was my fault, not theirs.  I was afraid that things wouldn't get done if I didn't do them.  Turns out, boys stay up way later than girls and don't get things done as soon as possible.  When I finally trusted them to do things and let go of the reins, the last of these groups projects turned out really well and we all contributed equally.
           On individual assignments, I'd like to think that I got everything done on time, without procrastination, and gave things all my effort.  With marching band conflicting first trimester, it's been really hard to get things done without distraction, and physically, to have the time to do them.  I'm pretty proud of my ability to get things done without wasting time and to have worked as efficiently as possible for all assignments.  I hope that the end of the trimester will end this same way, and that I'll be able to plot out my time strategically to finish things up without losing sleep or time.
            Looking back over my goals, I'm shocked to see that I completed more of them than I thought I would.  I said that my major weaknesses were being able to classify poems, knowing about literary time periods, analyzing quotes, and understanding the author's purpose.  Through the first part of the trimester, we focused a lot on literary periods and the classifications of poetry that went along with them. Just being able to group them and generalize different types of poetry, made it a lot easier for me to identify that things I should be looking for when analyzing poetry. On our practice essays, especially, I found that this knowledge made it a lot easier to infer the purpose and overall meaning of what I was reading.
           Even though I accomplished many of the major goals I had set for myself, there are of course, those that I didn't follow through on. I told myself that in order to better analyze quotes, I'd individually set aside time to practice reading essays and poems, which I didn't really get to.  Probably unrealistically, I also told myself that I'd memorize words and names literary devices so that when I came across them on multiple choice tests, I wouldn't be completely taken off guard.  But, that didn't really happen...Although I neglected some of these set goals, the first trimester of this class pretty adequately prepared my for the challenges I so often face in taking multiple choice tests and writing essays.  Looking back over all the work we've done in the class thus far, I can confidently say my analytical and composition skills have improved greatly, and I can't wait for the second part of the class to further these skills.
        

Blog #17 (Hamlet # 6)



Hamlet Literary Analysis

Words, Words, Words…
Zoe Storch
Ms. Wilson
AP Literature and Composition
12 November 2013
AP Prompt:
In a novel by William Styron, a father tells his son that life "is a search for justice." Choose a character from a novel or play who responds in some significant way to justice or injustice. Then write a well-developed essay in which you analyze the character's understanding of justice, the degree to which the character's search or justice is successful, and the significance of this search for the work as a whole. Do not merely summarize the plot.
I have read and understand the sections in the Student Handbook regarding Mason High School's Honesty/Cheating Policy. By affixing this statement to the title page of my paper, I am certifying that I have not cheated or plagiarized in the process of completing this assignment. If it is found that cheating and/or plagiarism did take place in the writing of this paper, I understand the possible consequences of the act, which could include a "0" on the paper, as well as an "F" as a final grade in the course.
x__Zoe Storch__
 
Ms.Wilson                                                                                                                                        Storch1
AP English Literature and Composition
12 November 2013
Hamlet Literary Analysis


           In Shakespeare's Hamlet, a recurring theme of justice weaves itself through nearly every character’s storyline, serving not only as the catalyst for action, but as the final resolution to the play. William Styron writes in his novel that life "is a search for justice", a piece of wisdom which in itself compromises all of Hamlet’s decisions and soliloquies. The prince of Denmark fights for justice, debates life and death over it, and ultimately, perishes by it. Hamlet’s personal encounters with true justice parallel the larger theme of the work. Shakespeare himself toys with its meaning in his choice to kill off each character after they have committed a wrong. Side by side, the many exemplifications of justice in Hamlet showcase a more universal truth. They stress that true justice is only achievable through revenge, yet the fight for it is an endless cycle, one that almost always ends in tragedy.

            From the bleak start of his journey, Hamlet is already faced with a decision that will shape his journey as a hero. The world seems to be crumbling around him as he struggles to come to terms with the death of his father, and the marriage of his mother to his Uncle isn’t much help. Shortly after Claudius is crowned, he is shocked by the apparition of his dead father. The arrival of the supernatural being triggers his quest for true justice, as he learns that his father has been murdered by his Uncle and he realizes he must choose a path of action. Yet, just like the many other characters in the play, his decision leads him to a fork in the road, one trail veering towards morality and the other, to revenge. His ghost father clearly directs him to "Revenge his foul and most unnatural murder." ( 1.4.25) , and initially, Hamlet obeys, convincing himself that it is "the thoughts of love" that will justify his actions (1.4.29). This pivotal choice defines Hamlet and his morality in respect to achieving justice, but in the bigger picture, serves as only the first half in his complete journey. Hamlet’s view when compared with other characters’ enforces the very loose definition given to true justice by Shakespeare. His initial stance on the matter, revenge for family bonds, represents justice’s personal nature. It hints at the fact that in reality, justice may too subjective to ever define, too strongly linked to personal beliefs to judge what is right and what is wrong.
            Perhaps the most famous poetic soliloquy, Hamlet’s "to be or not to be" speech expands on Shakespeare’s understanding of justice even further, clearly illuminating the struggle between life and death, action and silence. Caught in a mental war involving his own suicide, Hamlet considers the harrows of being alive. His uncertainty to obtain revenge against Claudius has come to a head, and he theorizes that maybe living at all isn’t worth it, that "to sleep […] we end the heart-ache and the thousand natural shocks that flesh is heir to…" (3.1.61). In an artful argument against himself, Hamlet asserts that the quest for justice is an internal struggle. And, "thus," he says, "conscience does make cowards of us all […] the native hue of resolution is sicklied o’er with the pale coast of thought…" (3.1.83) He states that the imprisonment and constant contemplation of one’s mind makes action or revenge nearly impossible, concluding that being alive means fighting against this conscience and deciding for oneself what true justice really is.
                                                                                                                                 Storch 2
              Following the storylines of the play’s other characters, readers realize that Hamlet isn’t the only one who must choose what true justice is really worth. The final scene features the resolutions of all these storylines combined, and as a whole, asserts Shakespeare’s belief that although revenge is the only way to truly achieve justice, one’s search for it only enters them into a deadly cycle, beginning with the quest for compensation and ending with their own downfall. Claudius, very undeniably, is killed in response to his own murderous actions. As he dies, Hamlet states, "Here, thou incestuous, murd’rous, damned Dane, Drink off this potion." (5.2.289). The death of Claudius clearly reflects the play’s overall theme: revenge is the only way to achieve true justice. Following it are two more deaths, Laerte’s, similar to the King’s in the fact that he is dying after seeking an immoral revenge. The last death, however, illustrates the more paradoxical nature of justice when the archetypal hero of the play, Hamlet, also faces his own downfall after having finally achieved his own form of true justice by killing Claudius. In this demise we are confronted with the main dilemma and belief of Shakespeare’s: that although true justice is attained through revenge, revenge is an immoral action, one that ends in the demise of the immoral individual. With this in mind, the entire plotline of Hamlet is given new meaning. As a whole, the play illuminates a more universal truth involving the search for true justice. Seen in the lives of Shakespeare’s characters, it becomes apparent that true justice is subjective, and that in one’s quest to achieve it, we all become sinners.